Life As we knew It

"Thank you sir, that will be......... 3.75, thack you for shopping at S-Mart" Brad said to an obeese, middle-aged, balding man holding a "Big Grab" of chips and a Slushie. "Next." Brad siad as the obeese man was walking out the door. A girl about Brad's age was now infront of him, holding one of those crapy "Teen Scene" magazines. At first he didn't recignoze her, but then he realized it was Liz from his high school. "That'll be 1.40, Liz" Brad said. "uh Hi, do I know you?" Liz said, as she handed him the money. Brad lifted up the bangs covering his face, and was answered by a faint "Oh, hi Brad."

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Life As we knew It

"Thank you sir, that will be......... 3.75, thank you for shopping at S-Mart" Brad said to an obeese, middle-aged, balding man holding a "Big Grab" of chips and a Slushie. "Next." Brad siad as the obeese man was walking out the door. A girl about Brad's age was now infront of him, holding one of those crapy "Teen Scene" magazines. At first he didn't recignoze her, but then he realized it was Liz from his high school. "That'll be 1.40, Liz" Brad said. "uh Hi, do I know you?" Liz said, as she handed him the money. Brad lifted up the bangs covering his face, and was answered by a faint "Oh, hi Brad." Liz then sat down on one of the benches for sale and started reading, as Brad finished his shift. Brad was screwing around with the Cash-register when his best friend Nick walked in, "WaZZA, My niggas, HAHAHAHAHAHAHA" Screamed Nick as he walked in threw the automatic door. Brad and Liz couldn't help but laugh. Nick walked over to the refridgerator, and grabbed an Dr. Fizz Cola, opening it with his teeth and chugging it down. "Yo dude, You gotta pay for that soda." demanded Brad, his eye focused on Nick. "Shut The Hell Up, Cock-Smoker" replaid Nick, as he threw Brad a crumpled up 1 dollar bill. Brad continued his shift into the night, while Liz and Nick stayed with him. Nick drinking Can after can of soda, and Liz reading all the crapy teen magazines. Brad walked over to the sliding automatic door and locked it. He was counting todays Earnings when he heard a clanging sound at the door. There was a man banging at the door. "Oh My god......He is drunk, haha" Said Nick, pointing at the staggering man. Brad screamed "Sorry, WE are Closed!", but got only moans in reply. Nick screamed, "Look asswipe WE ARE FUCKING CLOSED!", but the man still banged at the door. Brad finaly said "Fuck this, I'll jsut let him in." Liz quickly answered "No No No, he might be like a crazy murder or something!" as she stood. Nick said "Fuck this, I'm callin' the pigs."



Nick went behind the counter and grabbed the phone, pushing in the numbers 911.

"Hello, 911 emengancey"

"Yo, this is the S-Mart, there is a man out side banging on the door, and he wont go away, we asked him too but, he just keeps trying to break the saftey glass"

"A car will be dispatched, Stay on the Line Sir."


After Nick answered all of the operator's questions wich took 5 minutes, a police car arrived. 2 men stepped out, Each in officer uniforms. One drew his night stick, the other hand cuffs. They could hear faint words but only mumbling. The police officer was about to try to tackle the man to the ground, when the man bit him.

"Hello, Operator. A police Oficer Has Been BITTEN!!!!, Holy Shit Please SEnd More"

"I would if i could, but we deploded all from the nearest stations"

Nick slammed the phone down. He ran over to the Sport section and grabbed 2 bats. Brad and Liz jsut stood in amazment, as The non-bitten officer shot into the man's chest, but the man only staggered closer. The bitten officer was on the ground, bleeding, holding the wound on his neck. Brad stummbled with the keys, Nick ran throught the doors and Hit the crazy man on the head. The man fell to the ground, with a huge hole in his head. When the man dropped Nick could see thousands of people staggering twoards the S-Mart. He quickly told the officer to hurry inside, When the bitten officer stood up and staggered towards Nick. He answered him with a quick hit to the head the Ran inside. Brad quickly locked the doors, as Nick and The Officer panted.

Really nice!

If you Waste Time, You waste a life

Nick was panting his brains out, he started rubbing his head mumbling no over and over again. He didn't know whether he killed the man or not, but the man didn't seem to be getting up. Brad was tense, so was Liz, Brad broke the silence by saying " Guys, I think we should board up the doors." Everyone nodded, Nick and the officer headed to the hardware section, grabbing nail, screws, hammers, screw drivers, 2 by 4s, tables, anything. As they were loading everything into a shopping cart Nick asked "So uh what your name?" He said this to a muscular, bald, black man. "Name's Tim, Yours" The Officer answered. "Nick, come on lets hurry." said Nick as he was wheeling the cart as fast as he could. They came to a screeching hult at the door, Nick's jaw lituarily dropped. People were baning at the door whereing blood stanied T-Shirts, Limbs missing, And thier skulls exposed. It took them about 40 minutes to board up the door. Theys tarted with a huge board across the center, then making a grid of boards, followed by another grid for saftey. Then placing baords on the edges and corners, also hammering a thick wood sheet over everything. They then found any sheet metal they could, Brad took a welding set, and tacked the sheet metal over the whole mess. Nick went to the side of the door and looked to see how safe it was, well it was protruding from the wall by about 1 foot and a half. They then sat in a circle to figure out what to do.

Brad: "We should all take to looking for specific things"

Liz: "I'll gather all the canned food"

Nick: " I'll look for weapons"

Tim: "I'll, uh, uh, find a way to get to the roof?"

Brad: "Sounds good, I'll move some couches from the furniture section over to the Electronic section, So we can watch the news. I'll also make sure the fuse box is holding up."

Everyone nodded and got to work.

Nice i like, i could see this as a film.
I really like how your chars react, but lizz is a little inactive, but im loving it.

Here is her background info:

Was popular in school

Best friend died

she was sad

No one liked her becuase she was sad

she cheered up but none liked her still

she is a quiet one, Mr. Grinch

sorry for DP

Im going to play Cronicals of Riddick, and Halo for computer, new parts of story will be when i get bored

KEWL!!!!! ILIKE!!!! youve definatly put all your experiance from your previous storys into this one.... like _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ said, I like how your chaerctors act! keep it up this one rocks!

Armed With Brains

*Swish-clank-swish-clank* was the sound that could be heard in the sporting section as Nick sawed through a shot gun barrel. Liz came running through, almsot tripping over Nick,
Liz: "Stop, YOU WILL BREAK THE GUN! You crazy TWAT"

Nick: "Stop PMSing, I know my guns, this will make the bullets spread, and that means take more down with one shot"

Liz knelt down Next to Nick and ran her finger down a shotgun shell. Nick turned his head to face her as he siad "Here take this and check up on everyone, see how they are doing" He handed her a simple P98, for protection if she ever needed it. Liz walked away, shoving the pistol in her back pocket.

Nick: "AHHHHHH, WAit! That thing will go of if you keep it there. Here take this!"

Nick threw her a hip-holster.

Liz: "Thanks Nick, Uh good luck I guess"

Liz walked out of the section, she saw in the distance a man on a ladder, and quickly ran
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shit i g2g again

nice keep going

Armed With Brains

*Swish-clank-swish-clank* was the sound that could be heard in the sporting section as Nick sawed through a shot gun barrel. Liz came running through, almsot tripping over Nick,
Liz: "Stop, YOU WILL BREAK THE GUN! You crazy TWAT"

Nick: "Stop PMSing, I know my guns, this will make the bullets spread, and that means take more down with one shot"

Liz knelt down Next to Nick and ran her finger down a shotgun shell. Nick turned his head to face her as he siad "Here take this and check up on everyone, see how they are doing" He handed her a simple P98, for protection if she ever needed it. Liz walked away, shoving the pistol in her back pocket.

Nick: "AHHHHHH, WAit! That thing will go of if you keep it there. Here take this!"

Nick threw her a hip-holster.

Liz: "Thanks Nick, Uh good luck I guess"

Liz walked out of the section, she saw in the distance a man on a ladder, and quickly ran over to the man.

Liz: "Hey, uh Tim, it is, Anyway, hows it goin'?"

Tim: "Well, eh, uh, There is a vent here right, but i dunno where it leads, im to big to fit in, can you help me out?"

Liz: "I don't Know.......................What if there are thoose 'things' in the vents"

Tim: "Nick gave you a gun right, well use it."

Liz sighed, Tim stepped down of the ladder and helped her up.

Tim: "You know how to use that right?"

Liz: "Um, I think, This is the dangerous end right"

Liz pointed to the barrel. Tim took the gun he cocked it, and switched off the saftey.

Tim: "Now it is......Good luck, i guess"

Liz: "Um Thanks, I think?"

Liz slid up into the vent, crawling on her stomach, she only gained a few feet every minute. The sound of a fan could be heard though out the vent. Liz was scared, so scared she didn't know if she remembered how to crawl. She tried talking to herself to calm down "I don't think they can climb ladders, besides I got a gun, but that officer shot that man at least 4 times in the heart, and in wouldn't fall. Oh great, I just got myself more scared." Liz was know in the vent for at least 6 minutes, when she saw a grate under her. She didn't see anyone in the room, but she saw a First aid kit, some emergancey rations, and 2 doors. She shoved her finger through the grating and lifted it up. Quickly jumped down, shifting the psitol over everyspot of the room. She stopped and gave a sigh of relief. She walked over and sat down next to the first aid kit, then something caught her eye. Then she heard a few moans, this made her jump up and start aiming the gun everywhere, her hand tense and on the trigger. She saw one of thoose things and let out a scream, pointed the gun at the thing, closed her eyes, and pulled the trigger 4 times. She opened her eyes and saw the thing mving towards her still. Right then she heard a bang out the door, the door came crashing down, there stood Nick armed with a double barrel shotgun, he looked like an angel to Liz. He fired a shot into the back of the things head, it dropped dead to the floor.

Nick: "You ok Liz?"

Liz: "Yeah, yeah, i'm fine, thanks, I owe ya one."

Brad and Tim ran in, Brad with a crowbar, Tim with an axe.

Brad: "Fuck, We miss anything?"

Nick: "hey thanks guys, you know, HELPING ME AND ALL!"

Tim: "You seem to ahve done pretty well"

Brad: "Come on, lets get this stuff into the electrionic deppartment, I think that were we should sleep."

A banging sound was heard at the other door, then a crash. Nick sholdered his shotgun and aimed at the door. "WAit, WAit, No, Don't shoot" said a man in a secruity outfit as he kept out from behind the door frame, or what was left of it. "I'm tucker, the secruity guard, I was up on the roof fixing the Satilite dish, I saw that big scene down there, so i was kinda spooked."

Nick: "Sup, Tuck"

Brad: " I was wondering where you were, your an asshat"

Tucker: "Yo man, back off!"

Tucker came completely out of the door way, exposing the S&W revolver on his belt.

Brad: "Come on, Help us move this stuff to the electronic dep."

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