ok... now i get it....

NO YOU POST NOW!! OR i will murder you and your then ill make to you while then i will get . Look at my rambling on in my young ages!

You will murder his weed? Oh the humanity.
And then you'll rape him?
Jesus.
Looks like "now you will know the horror" jouni.

I'd post the story if I were you.


As far as feedback...its With, not whit, and its flew, not flied.

Ehehe.. Sorry, i got caught in playing Knight Online

But its nice to see you want to read my stoy so much

Ill see if i have time to write a part now

Ps: Just gotta love Blaze's feedback

Edit: Nope, but ill dedicate tomorrow for the story

.. No really!

This post has been edited by -=Jouni=- on February 06, 2005 12:34 am

"..And tear me open pour me out, theres things inside that scream and shout.."
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Phil took one last look at the room and then his image faded to the dark hallway.

Behind the door, Phil heard loud thumping, louder than the your-regular-imp. Must be that beast that killed Arlene.

".. No hiding now, i got nothing to lose, becouse ive lost everything allready." Phil tought to himself. Phil opened the door and quickly looked around, but it was too dark to see anything. Phil took a few steps in the room.

Sudenly the door behind him closed and everything turned red, atleast he saw now.

And boy, what he saw. Human bodies or parts of them hanging from the roof, and some of them were sticked to the walls. They all started moaning. Youd think Phil would have gotten used to all that, but he havent. No one would be able to bear sights such as those.

Phil heard the loud thumping again, it echoed everywhere. Phil's heart beated like it was crazy.

The bodies kept moaning, "Shut Up!!" Phil screamed.

The moaning stopped, and so did the thumping. There was another door leading out of the room, Phil opened it and quickly looked around.

There was nothing, so Phil went outside the room and sighed. It was another hallway, but it wasnt dark; there was one big window on the right wall. Creepy mooni'ish light came out of the window.

Phil looked outside at the stars.

Phil remembered earth and smiled faintly, "Thats what she would have wanted..." he tought to himself.

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Ah I was about to correct a bunch of incorrect words, but then I just remembered that you're from finland (right?).
So its not exactly insane for you to use the wrong tense/whatever for a word. I know I couldn't write as good in french, the only language apart from English I can barely get along in.

Yes, im from Finland.

And i sometimes write rather fast and i may get typos that i dont notice.

"..And tear me open pour me out, theres things inside that scream and shout.."
PART 2
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As a small sence of safety came to Phil, he remembered how hungry he is. All his food, and any other supllies, have been blown up eons ago.

There was a vending machine near Phil, he brake the class and took lots of chocolate bars, and started eating them like he never saw food.

All the time he ate, he had a feeling that the walls were looking at him. Phil putted a few chocolate bars to his shredded pockets. Phil stood up and started walking forward.

Suprisingly to him, the walking was hard, Phil wiped sweat off his face and breathed heavily. The hallway seemed to become longer the more he walked, there was no end to it. Phil started running, but the hallway didint end. Breathing started being extremely hard, and it was hot.

It was like Phil was boiling.

Phil stopped running and fell to his knees, his heavy breathing echoed in the hallway.

Phil's vision started blurring, his hands couldnt hold his body anymore. Phil fainted from exhaustion.

Before fainting Phil heard distant laughing, the feel of someone waching him became stronger and stronger..

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Just to draw this up.. Sorry for the lack of updates, have been busy whit other things.

I will try and make a rather long episode if i feel like it.

"..And tear me open pour me out, theres things inside that scream and shout.."
PART 3
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Phil suddenly opened his eye's and breathed furiously. Phil was still lying on the hallway, he had no idea for how long he had been sleeping, or how he fell asleep anyway.

It was still hard to breath, but atleast now Phil could move.

Phil walked forward until he got to the end of the hallway, there was a door but it looked like something had runned trough it. Phil stepped trough the blasted door to a seemingly large, dark room that felt strangely warm.

After a while Phil's eye's got used to the dark and he could see better.

There was all kinds of pipes and pumps in the room, most of them had a *Oxygen* text on them.

Phil noticed a strange shadow appearing in front of him, he turned around but saw nothing, but there was still a shadow around him.

Phil senced trouble and looked up.

There was an imp in the roof, it jumped off the roof, allmost falling on Phil.

Phil smirked, "Compared to that horned one, your nothing." he said, the imp made a grin and pointed at the oxygen pumps.

Phil looked at the pumps, then at the imp, and at the pumps again, "No you wont!" he yelled and jumped in front of the imp, grabbed it's hand and squeezed. The imp showed no marks of pain, then it kicked Phil in his stomach whit its knee, Phil lost the grab of the imp's hand and took a few steps back holding his stomach.

The imp formed a fireball and threw it in the pumps.

The explosion threw both Phil, and the imp to the wall, knocking them out.

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Phil slowly opened his eyes, he could not see propebly, and his ears were ringing, but all that wasnt new to him. Phil breathed weakly, it was getting harder and harder to breathe.

*Warning, oxygen levels decreasing.. Using reserve oxygen tanks, all personel should evacuate the facility as fast as possible* Said a calm female voice, obviusly a recorded message.

Slowly, it started to be easier to breathe, but the reserved tanks wouldnt last long. Phil stood up, he wondered where the imp would have gone. Phil stepped out of the room and the imp dropped from the roof in front of Phil, the imp roared and slashed Phil whit it's claws, blood splattered to the walls.

Phil took a few steps backwards and fell to his back, whitout any body armor, blood pumped out of the wound.

The imp laughed, "Dont think so much of yourself, weakling!" it said in a booming voice. The imo grabbed Phil from his throat and started choking him.

Phil's vision blurred, he tried to resist.

".. What am i fighting for? Who am i fighting for? I have lost everything.. Fighting back would just make this nightmare last longer.." A voice said deep inside Phil's mind.

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Earthling Pride
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All the great cities have fallen under the iron fist of 'imps' and the like.

Still, a handful of humans have survived, and now, they fight for their lifes every second.

A light came to the darkness, a firefight has begun, a fight for survival has begun. Normal civilians, who's lifes were turned upside down in a matter of days, now desperately struggle for their own survival and still hope there is a goverment, and that the soldiers would come to save them.

Which will not happen.

In a matter of minutes the fight is over. The imps slaughtered the humans, they joined the overgrowing pile of human ashes.

"These earthlings are weak" Grunted one of the imps, "We shouldnt have killed them so fast, torturing them would have been much more entertaining" said the other imp.

The imps heard loud thumping behind them, "Barons" hissed on of the imps.

Two horned imp-like creatures came, they were bigger in every way compared to regular imps. One of the Barons roared, "Those humans were ours!" it yelled, "Says who" the other imp hissed, "We do!" yelled the other Baron furiously, "Perhaps we'll kill you for our entertainment!" yelled the other Baron.

Horrible screams were heard that night.

Something woke up in the darkness, "Did you hear that?"

It was some more humans, a man and a woman, hiding from the imps. "Yeah.. Sounded like imps and.. Something else" said the man, "The gunfire stopped, they must have killed the other humans.." said the woman, the man putted his hands into fists and screeched his teeth, "Damn those bastards.. And theres nothing we could do" he said.

"I.. I hope.. I hope someone would save us, where is the army, where is the goverment.." whispered the woman.

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Phil opened his eyes, "I will not fail you!" he screamed, and kicked the imp in its head, blood flew from its nose but it didint let Phil go, instead it started forming a fireball. Phil screeched his teeth, he kicked again and again and again but the imp just smirked. "Oh, it seems you did fail them" the imp laughed.

Phil's eyes turned red, the imp's smirk faded, Phil looked in the imp's eyes.

The imp suddenly stopped forming the fireball and dropped Phil down, it seemed to be horrified of Phil. "Fail this, you freak!" Phil yelled and started kicking and punching the imp like there was no tomorrow.

After a few minutes Phil stopped, the imp fell down lifeless. Phil breathed heavily, then he screeched his teeth, "I have to get out of here, i have to get back on earth"

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This is pwnage, So jouni ill be around 9 get the wine and the sexy dinner rdy

Thanks!

Hehe We'll see.. I should read to some exams but i think ill get time for a new episode.

Um...just...wow...that...that was incredible. I'm...just...I'm....




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