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Shadows In The Dark, Part 2 of Alone Forever| Grey Snake |
Posted: December 30, 2004 05:44 pm
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Plot
For years the large city of New York City had been under siege by the undead. The miltary had barricaded the city, so that noone could get in or out. It has now been 2 years since the power plant explosion in the city. People were horrified at the tales of the survivors who had survived the incident. They told great storyies of courage, and loved ones lost in the conflict. Most of the survivors had grouped up and reachecd the rooftops of the skyscrapers. Only at night to see the shadows...in the Dark. This is were our Story Begins. -------------------- Moderators of Fourms
Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
| Grey Snake |
Posted: December 30, 2004 05:59 pm
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Part 1-The Gas Station
______________________ As Ben worked around the clock. He was dusting when his friend Bill was getting his coat and hat on to go. "See ya tomorrow Ben, have a great night!" Bill replied cheerfully. He had short brown hair. With watery blue eyes, but little did they know. There would be no tomorrow only with chaos. Ben's father was one of the survivors of the incident. Ben didn't believe in zombies and monsters until his father told him the story. Of how he survivied the incident. Suddenly a man burst through the door. "YOU GOTTA HELP ME! THEY'RE EVERYWHERE!" The man dropped to his knees and shouted it out me. He had a bite mark on his arm and some scratches or two. "What happened?" I asked him. "THERE IS NO TIME, WE GOTTA BARICADE THIS PLACE!" He kept screaming at me. Suddenly he started to take anything he could to barricade the windows. He threw it down and then looked at me. "We need wood" He said in a assured voice. I breathed a sign of relif. I pointed to the back with my finger. He started fo the door when suddenly there were moans and groans outside. I quickly went around the small desk, and to the door. "Don't go out there!" The man screamed at me. Then suddenly the electricity went out. I was terrified, for I always was afriad of the darkness. I saw some people outside, near this buidling. "Nothing out of the ordinary"I thought to myself. The man came back with some wood and some nails with a brick. "We need weapons, lots of em" He said to me in the dark. As the electricity came on. The figures outside turned towards us and began making gurgiling noises. The man looked at me and began nailing bourds to the windows. One of the figures sprinted towards our window, and I was horrified. Half of his face fell off, and he had ragged clothes with blood on his teeth. I began backing to the wall when he starting clawing at the window. "HURRY!" The man screamed. I nodded and took the piceces of wood and started nailing the window. More of the figures caught our attention and started towards us with their arim straight out. "Is this some sort of joke!?" I thought to myself. Suddenly I remembered the story my dad told me. "You're never safe in the dark, they were everywhere. You need to barricade all the windows and have a weapon. These things were dead, and I too was terrified of the darkness, every shadow that moved. I considered an enemy. If this ever happened again. You must do the same" I remembered it and took this as not a joke, but as real......... -------------------- Moderators of Fourms
Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
| Grey Snake |
Posted: December 30, 2004 06:14 pm
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![]() Clean up Crew Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 1295 Joined: November 16, 2004 |
Part 2- Night sets in
___________________ "There, all windows barricaded" I said to the men. He grabbed some bats from the corner and threw at me. "Your first weapon" He grinned. "By the way my name is Vince, yours?" He said. "Kevin" I answered. After we had gotten aquainted. I went to the phone to see if we could get help. It had an dial tone. I pushed the numbers 911. "911 emergency service,may I help you?" The lady at the phone said. "Yes, what the hell is going on? There are people outside with coustumes on" I questioned her. "I'm afraid that those are not people in coustumes, they are the...." Suddenly the phone went dead. I put the phone back up, and looked at the window. There were now twice at many of them. "We need to get on the rooftop" The man said to me. I nodded and looked at the small opening in the roof. "Boost me" I said to him. He nodded and boosted me on his shoulders. I reached the ladder and pulled it down. "Up we go!" The man said. Suddenly the window broke and hands lunged forward. They were covered in blood, but were pale very pale. "Hurry, up!" The man started to get scared. We climbed the ladder to the roof and when the door swung open. A figure shuffled in and turned towards us, but we were already up on the roof. He smiled,but a wicked smile and I could see the eye in his socket. Suddenly he sprinted forward and grabbed the ladder. "Brains!" He screamed. I closed the small door on the person. As we looked over the edge there were dozens of them. "What the hell is going on?!" I said aloud. The figures seemed to not notice and started to break inside the gas station. I could see the shadows...in the dark. -------------------- Moderators of Fourms
Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
| Nikku |
Posted: December 30, 2004 10:11 pm
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![]() Mr. Coke ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 |
ur best story yet, oh yeah, wouldn't a gas station hae a gun or sumthin?
PS: your story made me fart, i dunno why? -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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| Grey Snake |
Posted: December 30, 2004 10:17 pm
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![]() Clean up Crew Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 1295 Joined: November 16, 2004 |
When I read your post. I was eating spagetill and meatballs. It disgusted me.
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Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
| Shifty |
Posted: December 30, 2004 10:23 pm
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lol.. nice story snake
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| Nikku |
Posted: December 30, 2004 10:51 pm
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![]() Mr. Coke ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 |
lol, hope u aren't pissed, jsut stating the facts.. dude it really did,
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| Grey Snake |
Posted: December 30, 2004 11:07 pm
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![]() Clean up Crew Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 1295 Joined: November 16, 2004 |
Part 3-Friend gone bad
_______________________ "We can't stay here all night" Vince said to me. I looked over the ledge and saw them still there. They had already broke into the gas station a while ago. Suddenly there was gunfire in the distance then silence. "OH MY STOMACH!" Vince shouted with pain. He dropped down to his knees and held his stomach. As I got near him, he took his hand and pushed me away. "Kill me NOW!" He shouted. I didn't understand what he meant. I thought he was having a cramp in his stomach, I could see something was seriously wrong. Suddenly he started vomited blood and looked up at me. His eyes were bloodshot and I could see something wrong with him. He charged at me and I grabbed his arms and knocked him to the ground. He made a strange hissing noise then jumped up. We made eyecontact, I could see he was no longer my friend, but one of them monsters. I saw the bat next to me and he saw it too. Before I could grab it, Vince charged at me one more time, but this time I grabbed his arms and forced him to the edge. He tried to bite me, but I dodged him and kicked him in the gut. He fell off the ledge and made a gurgling noise then silence. "phew" I breathed a sign of relief. As I looked over the edge, he was no longer in sight. It seemed he was swalloed up by the ever growing crowd. For one instance I saw him then he closed his eyes. "Rest in Peace" I said to him. I made a cross symbol over my chest and backed off. I sat on the cold ground and went into deep thought when I saw a vehicle by the road by the gas station. "I must get a sygnal to them" I thought. I started waving my arms at the car and it stopped for a brief moement then contiuned going. I sat back down and hoped someone would save me........ -------------------- Moderators of Fourms
Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
| Nikku |
Posted: December 30, 2004 11:18 pm
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![]() Mr. Coke ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 |
more,
is the main charater's the main charater's son from Alone Forevar? -------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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| Grey Snake |
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![]() Clean up Crew Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 1295 Joined: November 16, 2004 |
yep. This alone forever part 2 but i gave it a differnt name. Keven is mr.spencers son from alone forever. But i never finsihed alone forever. I ended it where they were in the power plant.
-------------------- Moderators of Fourms
Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
| Nikku |
Posted: December 31, 2004 03:23 am
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![]() Mr. Coke ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 |
Uh, Confusing, but awesome
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| Grey Snake |
Posted: December 31, 2004 03:37 pm
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![]() Clean up Crew Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 1295 Joined: November 16, 2004 |
I'm not in the mood to add the next chapter. I appreciate the comments.
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Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
| Grey Snake |
Posted: December 31, 2004 05:45 pm
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![]() Clean up Crew Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 1295 Joined: November 16, 2004 |
Part 4-Rescued
_______________________ I contiuned to sit on the roof. I started to get sleepy and started to lay on my back. I gazed at the stars. How beautiful they were, but the moon was not. It had a a bloodyred color to it, suddenly I heard the sound of a helicopter in the distance. I quickly sat up, and looked, there was a small helicoper coming towards the gas station. I started to wave my hands at for a sygnol. The helicopter finally saw me and started to fly towards me. "Attention! Attention! Have you been bitten?" A man on the helicopter yelled to me. "No!" I shouted back. Suddenly the helicopter was beganing to set down on the roof when they heard the maons and groans below. "Can't Land" The man again shouted. The helicopter's lights blinded me and I covered me eyes. The man then let down a rope and I grabbed a hold of it. "Hold on!" The man shouted to me. He made a thumbs up symbol to the pilot and we flew away from the gas station......... -------------------- Moderators of Fourms
Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
| Grey Snake |
Posted: January 02, 2005 06:56 am
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![]() Clean up Crew Group: BB Betatesters Posts: 1295 Joined: November 16, 2004 |
comments?
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Jakkar TSS Grey Snake Immoral Sniper _CiviliaN^SoldieR_ --------------------------------------------------------------------- Installation Guide - Step By Step Guide The Angel Estate - My story |
| TheSecondOne |
Posted: January 02, 2005 09:50 am
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pretty good mate, keep it up
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I've been chosen You think it's over But I'm ready to go I am what you fear I've been chosen The world as you know it just died It's the end of all time *Heavensgate* |