Smoke drifted from a door in Harpland Drive, L.A. All of a sudden it swung open and smoke drifted out. Anyone passing by could have sworn it would be weed but hey no one was. Mic and Jake walked out of the door wearing faded Star Wars and Nirvana T-Shirts and baggy jeans. They both began to sing to the lyrics of "Alternative Allstar" and joked down the street.

"Hey, dude, uh...uh...uh" Mic exclaimed in a dazed mood.

"Yeah, what." Jake replied.

"Uh...shit I really don't know."

Mic and Jake kept walking and turned a corner and a sickly smell entered their nose.A smell of death.

"For fuck sake man. You fucking fart."Jake told discustidly.

"Piss off that was you."Mic said vaguelly.

"Well if it wasn't me or you then who the fuck was it hmm?"

All of a sudden a loud moan filled the street and they both looked up.They were greeted with a sight of hundreds of people lurching down the street towards them. They were knocking into each other and draging them selfs down towards them. Jake and Mic gawped at the sight before them.

"Holy shit man" Mic excalmied."Oh my fucking God...dopes on the increase sucka."

"Shit yeah" Jake retorted happily."Looks like good shit too."

They both head banged excitedly and walked away from the lumbering bunch of corpses.

After about half an hour Jake left Mic and went home. Mic began to get really bored and decided to get laid then wasted in that order. Luck was on his side after five minutes searching he found someone. She saw him near instantly and began to walk towards him. She was a little more corpsy and smelled worse that he would have like but he didn't really care.

He ran over and grabbed her hand and led her excitedly into a dark alley. There he began to do what you would do to a prostitute and hopefully this one was female. He still had nightmares about the male prostitute he once got. he was suprised at how cold she was "Inside" and instead of what he thought she would say all she did was moan and grumble.

After he was satisfied he let the woman do what she wanted to do and she gave him what he thought was a love bite. It was a little too hard and he heard his skin shread between her teeth but he didn't care he was still in a state of nirvana after the weed.

Then she withdrew her teeth and he fell to the damp alley ground. Some one passed the aley and the woman lumbered after them. Mic just lay thre he was begining to find it hard to breathe and soon he passed out.

When he came to he had quite a strange urge to go eat some human flesh. It was dark and he was in pain he let out a scream but all he could hear was a moan. He slowly truged out of the alley slugishly and began to wander the streets.

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If people like it I'll begin to write a part 2. Also this one was done quick so it won't have been to good.

I'm guessing the sex and drug abuse thing was just to lure people in.

best story ever, becuase of the head banging

lol thanks and it was to lure people in but i dnt exactly lie just bent the truth. next part soon.

Mic turned a corner and wandered down a street. He was getting confused at what was happeing and had a sore stomach. He just ate a bad italien and was feeling quite sick.

"Last time I bloody eat a mafia boss" He moaned loudly."Hmm maybe an indian or a chinease would setle this bugger of a stomach."

He lurched down a street. To his luck, on his left was a large chinease resteraunt. he felt that some-one was in there and began to walk up the stairs and into the resteraunt.

A faint smell of chinease food still lingered in the air andchairs were stacked neatly for a nother day that would never come.All of a sudden a little chinease man popped up from behind a bar holding a shotgun in his hands.

"Geet de fook out o' here" the little chinease man shouted.

"Look mate i'm hungry, can I just have a little nibble of some good food."Mic said but all that came out of his mouth was a low groan again.

The little chinease man took aim and fired.

Mic heard the explosion and thought he was dead. Then he remembered he was dead already probably. He looked down and saw he had a hole in his left side of his gut. He screamed out angrily and lurched towards the little chinease man.

"oh, sheet" the little chinease man said right before Mic shoved out his hands and grabbed him and put him on top of the bar. He then shoved his hand nto his belly and ripped the little chinease mans bell straight open. The little chinease man began to scream out in pain and Mic ripped out his guts and devoured them. The little chinease man died and Mic walked out of the resteraunt feeling better about himself. He than began to walk the streets again.
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If you post good comments ill write a part 3. I don't care if u post negative ones.

i love it keep it up man

It had been a couple of hours after he had been turned into what he guessed was a zombie and he was beginning to get lonely. He let out a long, low, zombie wail of sadness. Annoyed that he was going to have to spend eternity alone, rotting and living off little chinease man take-aways. Then he relised he couldn't smoke dope now that he didn't breathe and got even sadder.

"It's so unfair." he groaned."Its that bloody hookers fault, ill rip her fucking head off! i'm so lonely now."Then a great idea came to him." I know what ill do"

Mic shuffled happily down the street moaning all the way past the blood filled streets and houses. He saw something out of the corner of his eye. It was a human. He shuffled hungrily down the street and followed the person into an alley.It was a girl in her mid-twenties, hot too. He drifted up behind her and right when he was as close as he thought he could get he let out a low mournful groan. The girl turned round and saw Mic and began to scream.

"Shut up"Mic groaned, grabbing her by the shoulders.He lunged his head down into her neck and bit hard. Her perfume drifted up into his nose and he gagged for a second. He then tore the flesh from her neck and blood rolled down his chin he swallowed the flesh gratefully and groaned at the creature he had become. he loked down at the girl and saw she was beggining to die. her breathing was beggining to slow andd she was losing dialision. He grabbed her and hauled her against the wall. by that time she was nearly dead.

"What the hell, I might as well."mic said sadly. He waited for her to die and was happpy to realise he could still get it up. He grabbed her thong and ripped it off the he began to have sex with her. It was quite strange to see two corpses having sex but no-one really saw them. All of a sudden the girl woke up and groaned loudly. She bit into his neck and began to try to eat his flesh in her confussion. She withdrew, lay back and began to enjoy the sex. She began to moan zombie sounds of Orgasm. Then Mic withdrew and got ready again, he walked out the alley with the girl zombie trudging behind. the they both began to
walk the streets together.
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If this too is liked ill write part 4 but im getting tested a lot now for my classes so it may be quite a while or it may be tommorow.

pretty cool - definitely a different perspective

thanks everyone thats replied i did think it was a different perspective as no-one seems to have written a story thats not violent kinda funny and from the zombies point of view. anyway after i finish this story im gonna get down and post a really violent horror story.or at least i hope.

Sorry, but I didn't enjoy it..

Scale of one to ten..

I give it an 5.

Goods +

- Funny
- Zombie prespective

Bads -

- Not seperated in paragraps
- Not enough description

Suggestions =

- Speratare your story into paragraphs.
- Eveytime a character speaks it starts a new line.

Example

"BLAST THEM!!!!" Bill screamed at the top of his voice. They kept coming, wave after wave after them. Joe blasted them with all his might.

"JOE NOO!" Bill screamed as Joe was devoured by the crowd. Bill ran away...to not confront his fears...

As you can see I started a new line {New paragraph} when a character spoke.

Hahaha, now he has a zombie girlfriend. I love it.

ok grey snake it was in paragraphs but the forum doesnt seem to let you miss spaces which is what i was doing you see the spaces at the end of the paragraphs and i did start a new line everytims someone different speaks but just continued it when noone else does, my horror story will be very descriptive this is mainly just to keep my mind off my test and stuff like that but thanks for the suggestions anyway. oh and expects more characters apart from mic and the zombie girlfriend to appear soon.

ill go back and fix the paragraph problem after you have seen what i meant.

Didnt notice someone biting his throat out? how stoned can you be....heh.

Ok thats the paragraphs fixed.

elite well it was some hours between the 1st and 2nd story so he had went through some changes so the gult of eating humans went away during this time and also part of the story was to show that zombies have changed into something different. it was his way of life and even though he knew of his old life, his eating habbits had changed and his remorse were gone thanks to the infection.
this probably will have annoyed you.sorry.oh and part 4 probably at the weekend.

A little funny that he dont make a gradual change into zombie, he's just *pop* eat flesh. He seemed to have no problems with it. Was it the weed? And no, I didnt look at the story because of sex. I like zombie stories, and read them all regardless.