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Yet Another Story With Forum Members!, Please read. -NOT DEAD YET!| Nikku |
Posted: February 26, 2005 09:10 pm
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 Mr. Coke  Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004  |
If he doesn't psot a new chapter today I will eAt my Own face, And HIS!
-------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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| Elite viking |
Posted: February 26, 2005 09:39 pm
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 Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
Yikes! Better start writing...
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| SirAlucard |
Posted: February 26, 2005 10:25 pm
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 Uberzernichter Group: Members Posts: 954 Joined: November 21, 2004 |
Yes you had
-------------------- im awesome bra'h
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| Elite viking |
Posted: February 26, 2005 10:58 pm
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
Don't eat my face! Please! I have made a new part! Look at it, so good it is... go fetch it! *tosses post at incoming Fred+Nikku +random newbs wanting the part, runs madly the other direction!*
BOOOOoooomm. The ground shook violently threatening to throw The.Raver off the jeep. Rusty grabbed his hand, as he lost his grip. Thanks, Raver said, So they couldnt hold it off anymore. They all looked down. God be with their souls, ZombieSlaya said silently. He was a violent, brutal man, and you didnt mess either with he or his God. Step on it, that was just the charge. The generator will make a blast capable of blowing up the entire lab! Rusty said, pale of fright. Actually, if the generator exploded, it would make a blast equal half the Hiroshima bomb. The floor was cracking under them, now constantly moving from side to side. The generator was acting up now. Drive man! Im pushing the engine already, so keep your pants on. Slaya answered, trying to focus on the road. They were racing onwards in the off-road jeep, driving trough the corridors in well over 80 Mph. Sweat drops were appearing on Greys forehead, as he with fear sensed the shaking intensify by every second. Dried paint drizzled off the walls in flakes. When they drove ahead, the small flakes got replaced with entire plaster sections, cracking up and falling off. One of the plasterboards fell off right when the car passed. It landed at the chassis, blocking the view along with sending out a carpet of white smoke. Grey pulled out his MP5, firing away on the walls ahead to make them fall before they got to them. Thwackthwackthwackthwack Fwith Fwithfwiwth Crash. The plasterboards fell off after a few rounds, weakened by the shaking. The car made a small 'thump' driving over the boards. THUmpTHump. The car shook even more than usual, but this time Raver had been prepared, holding on to the mounted cannon with a death grip. What the Hell was that-smack- ow! Rusty had gotten a punch from Slaya, after speaking with blasphemy. Dont use such words in my car. I wont tolerate it again. He had the mask of a statue, calm but sweating. Mugen looked back. It was a man Mugen wasnt as shocked as he usually would be, but he still looked sad. The man lay in a big pool of dried blood, missing part of his head and an arm. The car had created a long track of blood across his chest, and across the floor. Step on it! I HAVE TO GET OUT OF HERE! The handicapped one was violently shaking, hitting his fists at the seats. From his mouth ran a streak of blood, and he began to pale. Grab. Riitsh. Toss. Before anyone had reacted, the man was thrown out of the car. He hit the floor head first with a crushing sound. Rusty had grabbed the man by his shirt, lifted him up, the seams of the fabric loosening, and tossed him straight out. The first signs of madness in the fight for survival were seen. WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT FOR! Grey yelled at the man, slamming the MP5 in his ribs. ..hgnHe was the mostexpendable, you know And now, the jeep goes huh- faster. Rusty looked slightly insane, grinning. You should thank me. He died for us to live. He did his part. Grey hit him again with the gun, harder this time. He knocked the man unconscious. It was he that should be thrown out. Hes losing it. RRMMBLLLRRBMLLLRR. CrashCrashCRASHH. The ground was more like a stonefilled road, the wall falling down without the MP5 provoking it. The small rumbling they had heard in the beginning was now deafening. Its gonna go critical soon! Hurry! Even if no one wanted to admit it, the vehicle drove faster. The atomic reactor, making the energy for the complex (the generator), was now bursting out with flames; heat spikes shooting out from the core. The walls in the generator room, made of solid concrete, were coming crashing down. Everything was buried in the rubble. The heat was over a thousand degrees Celsius, melting the top layer of rubble. SHWWOOOOOoooooooOOOMMMM. It finally reached critical. Strangely, no sound was heard It was silent the moment it exploded. All went negative, black turning white and white turning black. Then it all became white, and the thunder was heard. WABAAaaAAMMM. Out from the room, a shockwave rippled trough the offices and labs, tearing molecules from each other, first tearing up only humans and wreckage. For every meter away from Ground Zero, though, it increased in force, vaporizing the mountain it laid on too. A kilometer away, a jeep was trying to escape You said it yourself a while back, rusty, you would let other people die before you, if it meatn your survival  This post has been edited by Elite viking on August 08, 2005 07:00 pm |
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| Nikku |
Posted: February 26, 2005 11:04 pm
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Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 |
MORE MORE MROE!!!!!
-------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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| Elite viking |
Posted: February 27, 2005 01:41 am
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
PLEASE DONT EAT MY FACE *sob*
new part(s) The.Raver actually fell off. He lost grip, and for two seconds, the most frightening seconds of his life until then, he ran along with the car, feeling his legs almost snap from the sudden acceleration from 0 to 100 Mph. HOLY SHIT! ITS GONE CRITICAL! The men in the car screamed almost in sync. The car had jumped a meter into the air from the blast, and they all felt the first, harmless shockwave from the blast shake through the lab. The exit were only a hundred meters ahead, if not less Time slowed down again for Grey. He heard the slow ripple of the shockwave come closer behind them, and the sound of metal, plastic and other thing twisting around from the heat, being slung like from a catapult along with the shockwave for some moments before they vaporized. FWOOFFwwzzthKRrnCtThFWFWOOFThKRzth. The air was almost electric from the energy outburst. He saw the wave come towards them. It was the strangest thing he had ever seen. At the front of the shockwave, caused by the massive heat he could feel all the way up to himself, the air flickered. (Hard to explain with my limited vocabulary, a fata morgana, ya know?) A strange, red ring came after that, with small jolts of electric lightning covering it, flame tongues licking out before disappearing. After the shockwave came the explosion itself. Everything disappeared when entering it. They became black, and he saw himself how the things were ripped from each other. And it came closer every moment. OUTSIDE! Slaya shouted. They had escaped out. But the blast had no intention of leaving them alone. It was closing in. Fast. Grey, with no time to explain, took the wheel and pulled hard right. He still had the slow motion feeling, and reacted way faster than anyone else. They hadnt noticed the blast behind them. They crashed right into a tree. Everyone got slung forwards, Slaya smashing his head at the wheel. While getting his face crushed against the car Slaya had time to give Grey a good punch. You- FWOOOoooOOOM. Out from the blast door, in a straight line going twenty meters came a fireball. Right where they would have been driving. The massive heat burned away all the vegetation in a huge radius, even scorching the hair of those in the car. -bastard The explosion had caught Civillian soldier off guard too. He had been constantly running, with only a few stops now and then, since he had escaped out from the lab. He had quickly punched in the code to the entry\exit door, and all the time screamed 44444HHHH!!!1111 444RRGHHS0RZ!!!11 z0MB1SE!!!!11, as he had done in the corridors. Not that anyone had began screaming with him or believing it, he had been a lone guy ever since he had told stories with he being the hero, and all other coworkers mysteriously dying all around him. So, everyone had taken it as a bad practical joke. Now, they were probably walking after him, slowly, limping like that guy in the lab had done And now he was into deep shit. When the ground had shook, he tripped in the toughest part of the path, with a lot of big stones not yet covered in gravel. His leg got stuck in a crack, he had kept falling, and KaKRACKrack, the leg had broken in multiple spots (A là Vertical limit, with the cameraman). The pain! He had never felt anything like it. Civillian had screamed out in agony for several minutes, crying. When the initial shock had stopped, he had tried to get the broken piece of meat out. But then, the pain went trough his foot like fire. He couldnt do anything but sit there and wait for help. His head jerked up. Was that It couldnt be. Could it? It was! In the distance, he saw somebody, no, several people coming towards him. It surely were some of the security officers, they had taken care of the incident, and now they were searching for the missing man. Hey! Over here! Its the missing guy, who screamed in the corridors! Youve taken care of the problem right? The figures walked towards him, not replying. Perhaps they were too far away. You guys hear me? They were pretty close now Shouldnt they be able to hear it, and respond? Wait a minute Now, he heard the moaning. They were limping towards him, slowly. He saw how they all looked like, and gasped in horror: They were all pale, clothes in rags, blood all over them. 444HH!!11 Z00MB11S!!!!1111 He shrieked, so high it would have destroyed the ears of anyone within a hundred meters. But no one was close. They slowly came towards him, Civ tried to get away, pulling all he could, but the leg hurt so much, he couldnt pull it loose N0 N0 N0 N000! They stretched out their arms, longing after a taste of the flesh lump. He wasnt escaping, just waving his arms, yelling. The zombies found it a little curious, but didnt really care very much. See, they were really smart, but being smart was low on the priority list. Priorities: Feed. Stretch out arms after training. Feed. Eat. Chomp on something. Moan. Be social. Feed. Talk. Be Smart. React to pain. See? AH AH AH NOOO ARRRGHH AAAHH ARGGAAAaa-CHRIIp Splash His screams were stopped short as the first to taste bit his neck like a vampire. GRggl.Grgllrghhh. When he tried breathing, the blood gurgled, making bubbles. The zombie leader found that too a bit curious, but was busy ripping out the spleen. Now Civ was shaking all over, trying to protect himself from his attackers. He punched at them, once, but then they bit off his hand, spraying even more blood around, mostly into the zombie's mouth, who drank it somehow... His eyes rolled in the back of his head as almost all of his blood flowed out. ChompChompRitchSplash. Civs not-eaten hand twitched once. His last movement as a living being. MWHAHAHAHAAAAAAA! Never try killing me in other stories, I will punish you gruefully! MWHAHAAAAHA HA HAAAHAHA HA aCk*cough cough cough cough Wheeze* ha ha.... This post has been edited by Elite viking on August 08, 2005 07:03 pm |
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| Nikku |
Posted: February 27, 2005 01:41 am
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Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 |
if i dont get more i am going to gp CRAZY, my legs are jumping up and down, i am twitching, and my mind is think of every posibatlity of the next chapters!
-------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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| Elite viking |
Posted: February 27, 2005 01:42 am
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
THERE! DONT EAT OFF MY FACE TODAY AT LEAST!
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| Radman |
Posted: February 27, 2005 01:44 am
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::Twitches:: City... 17 days... 17 days.. ::Sob:: -------------------- When theres no more room in hell, the dead will walk the earth...
 'They say people dont believe in heroes anymore... Well im going to give them back their hero." |
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| Elite viking |
Posted: February 27, 2005 01:46 am
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
Tomorrow man. Okay? DOnt cry. I hate seeing grown up policemen cry
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| Radman |
Posted: February 27, 2005 01:49 am
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Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 448 Joined: January 13, 2005 |
::Bursts into tears:: ok... ::sob:: Good work on the story so far... I hope my entrance is good (not TOO action packed but kind of like 'im caught of guard') -------------------- When theres no more room in hell, the dead will walk the earth...
'They say people dont believe in heroes anymore... Well im going to give them back their hero." |
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| Nikku |
Posted: February 27, 2005 01:49 am
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Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 |
dude, I was THE ONE WITH BULLET time NOT greysnake!
-------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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| Elite viking |
Posted: February 27, 2005 01:51 am
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
Someone set us up the bomb. Read that, maybe you will understand.
EDIT: THe clock is... 3. A. M Norwegian time. Viking has twenty. hours without sleep. Dont demand more parts, or anything that needs tweaking right now please I cant inject adrenaline in my veins to keep posting.. This post has been edited by Elite viking on February 27, 2005 01:52 am |
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| zombieslaya |
Posted: February 27, 2005 02:29 am
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 Zombie Hunter Group: Members Posts: 178 Joined: January 20, 2005 |
THIS IS THE AWESOMEST STORY EVER!!! this story is awesome, i was wondering if i could post this on my DA site, i would put the copyirght under your name and a link to your email as well, this story is too great to keep it here. PM me when you decide on this.
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| Till Death Do us Part |
Posted: February 27, 2005 03:43 am
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 Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 310 Joined: February 10, 2005 |
DOOD. CITY IS TOMORROW?!
SHWEETLES. (sorta like skittles, just with a shweet instead of a skitt) WOOT. -------------------- |
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