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Yet Another Story With Forum Members!, Please read. -NOT DEAD YET!| Till Death Do us Part |
Posted: March 01, 2005 04:27 am
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 Real zombie Nemesis  Group: Members Posts: 310 Joined: February 10, 2005  |
Kudos, kudos! Kepp writing.
NIKKU LIVES. CALL DR. FRANKENSTEIN. -------------------- |
  
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| zombieslaya |
Posted: March 01, 2005 05:59 am
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 Zombie Hunter Group: Members Posts: 178 Joined: January 20, 2005 |
this is great, i can hardly wait to hear how he survived that, and if any zombies survied with him as well, though i seriously doubt it, unless the radiation caused some to mutate into super zombies
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| Elite viking |
Posted: March 01, 2005 03:27 pm
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hehe... Wait and see... |
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| Elite viking |
Posted: March 01, 2005 04:40 pm
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
Nikku slowly sat up, his face a grim, tormented mask. For every movement, the pains jolted all over his mutilated body.
When the charge blew up, he was pressing the trigger. The zombies around him worked as a shield, and took away most of the blizzard of death. His hand and the belly was the only part that received splinters, and his combat vest took the bullets that went there. His hand was worse. The explosion had tore the guns off his hand as his arm was pierced with metal shards. After the explosion, very few of the undead was still standing. Nikku was by now covered in dead bodies, zombies killed by the blast, that had fell on him when he was sitting down. If they hadnt he wouldnt still be standing. After the reactor had received the payload, the roof was heavily damaged, ready to break by anything. As the reactor slowly got worse and worse, the chunks fell off, meaning certain death for anything on the ground. His collision bag was torn apart, almost drowning him in blood. He couldnt breathe, and had to cut his way trough the limbs in his way with his almost-machete HALO knife. He had heard the nuclear overload coming long before it actually came. The humming and shaking all around him was getting beyond anything he had felt before. He had quickly taken cover again, under the ever-faithful pile of corpses, just before it went critical. He had closed his eyes, but it flashed white even trough the solid rock. The heat was indescribable. The body armor became liquid; the white-hot Kevlar treads covering his body like hot wax. All hair on his body flickered away in an instant, his skin almost melted, revealing the thin layer below the leather skin, right above the blood veins. It was even worse at his open wounds. The flesh was burned away, even catching fire, some places not stopping before even the bone was black. He never, ever screamed out in pain, he knew it would make his inner organs catch fire too. His strength of will was put beyond its limits. His teeth scraped on each other until half of them were gone. There were only one good thing about the fire wave: The heat killed every single particle of Red Death, rendering it harmless. He was free from infection. The stench of burnt meat covered his small air pocket. He thought, many times, that he had actually died. While he was scraping a way through the wall of rock, his heart stopped several times. He fell to the ground, gasping, and it blackened for him. It was a miracle that he made it out. Hngwake uhhp Nikku wheezed, as he pulled a dark clump out. Hunter was crushed beyond recognition. Most of his internal organs were all right, his limbs a little better than Nikku, maybe his innards too. But his face It resembled spaghetti, spaghetti with meatballs and extra much tomato sauce. His nose was broken, the tip hanging in a tread of skin. He had half an ear. His jaw was broken, blood and drool dripping from his mouth. His neck had a nasty slice, from a bullet passing through it. It had missed his main vein by millimeters. It was all topped with a thick smear of dark and almost black blood. Nikku had thought about his last bullet. He had longed for it, wishing to pull the trigger and free himself. He had tried. Right after the heat wave, he had slowly pulled the Sig P226 out, and gaped around the barrel. He had smelled the gunpowder smeared at it, the smell heavenly compared to the stench of his own, burning flesh. He slowly pulled the trigger with his left hand. Click. The slug had exploded from the heat. It was like it was a grim gift from above, someone commanding him to stand up and keep fighting. He would. He had found Hunter a few meters besides him, one arm sticking under the rock. He had cut him loose with his knife, and with a will of iron he had dug trough the wall. Black. White. Nikku snapped out of his sleeping state, sensing his heart once again delivering blood at a steady pace. He slapped at Hunters cheek, the healthiest one. The other was reddish black ash. Slowly he woke up from his fever nightmares. He wheezed, before spitting out blood. It dripped down his face, washing away darker blood. Niku Yes, its gasp -me. Youre alive ack- Nikku replied, collapsing down. The damage finally took hold of his body. The two train wrecks lay on the ground, none of them with energy enough to stand. They stayed that way for some time, until Hunter had regained enough strength to begin pulling them both to the exit. He crept with one hand, holding at Nikku with the other. They crawled onwards, one centimeter at a time. At the exit of the room, once a door, now a gaping hole, they rested. They were never going to make it out at this speed. Nikku closed his eyes,The heart thudded irregularly, as one of the last organs to fail. The fate was grabbing hold of his body like it had tried so many times before. And just like the other times, Nikku refused to die. In a final attempt of making the body stand up, a part of the brain sent out Adrenaline along with Ephedrine and other stimuli fluids to pump through his veins. He jerked. his eyes shot up, and he got to his feet. He walked, his left foot halting, into a small storage room. And found what he needed. Row after row, filled with nutrition, medical supplies, firearms and a lot of security uniforms. They could still live trough the day. This post has been edited by Elite viking on August 08, 2005 06:41 pm |
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| SirAlucard |
Posted: March 01, 2005 06:57 pm
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 Uberzernichter Group: Members Posts: 954 Joined: November 21, 2004 |
That was a nice peice there good job on the story so far.
-------------------- im awesome bra'h
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| Keyes |
Posted: March 01, 2005 06:59 pm
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 I'm On A Boat Group: Moderators Posts: 2264 Joined: December 04, 2004 |
smart
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| Till Death Do us Part |
Posted: March 01, 2005 07:06 pm
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Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 310 Joined: February 10, 2005 |
Well, well, well, very nice twist. Extreme heat burning away the infection. Very smart.
Note: I had been meaning to ask this, but forgot every time. Let me ask before i forget again O_o In a post on my story thread (Genesis, people! check it out!....yes...shameless plugging of my own story..sob...) But anyway, I said my character was a hitman, but then after that post, you said I would be best friends with Radman. Isn't Rad a police officer? -------------------- |
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| Elite viking |
Posted: March 01, 2005 07:10 pm
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
OK you guys have never heard of eachother. Bert kinda filled the role as 'friend'. I'll let you be on a mission when the outbreak starts.
Aight? |
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| DarknessGlams |
Posted: March 01, 2005 07:12 pm
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 Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 427 Joined: January 22, 2005 |
None of the people in the generator explosion should have survived. Here is how and it is very,very long so i'll cut it short.
What happens in a nuclear explosion. The initial explosion is an E.M.P. or electro magnetic pulse. This short circuits any electrical range effectivly about 5-6 miles in diameter. At this point the car which had just left the building a few moments earlier should have broke down as they were still moving. Then a sudden release of energy melts any materials into gasses so Nikku and Hunter should be worse than vapourized. These gasses expand and create a pressure wave crushing everything. The building would have no walls or roof. This explosion would be many thousands (maybe millions) of times stronger than most conventional explosives. So the truck would have flipped and melted. The temprature would have set the grass around the car on fire if they had made it out of E.M.P. range in time so whoever fell on the grass would be a human barbeque. Highly harmful invisible rays (initioal nuclear radiation) would be emited for an 18 mile radius so the people in the truck would now be radioactive. Lastly anything remaining in the blast radius would also become radioactive so the people would also be poisioned. Now this is what would happen if Iraq nuked people. Good story. This post has been edited by DarknessGlams on March 01, 2005 07:14 pm -------------------- [nolargeimagesplz]http://img254.echo.cx/img254/2283/seminardeath2tn.gif[/IMG]
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| Till Death Do us Part |
Posted: March 01, 2005 07:14 pm
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Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 310 Joined: February 10, 2005 |
Okay, okay I just thought it was odd. And don't rush just to introduce me. I didn't mean for that last message to have any connotations of 'hurry up where am I?'. take your time. This is a great and interesting story. -------------------- |
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| Radman |
Posted: March 01, 2005 07:19 pm
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 Real zombie Nemesis Group: Members Posts: 448 Joined: January 13, 2005 |
Dude... I had to wait 17 days before I was first introduced to the story. Anyhow... GREAT story viking. This post has been edited by Radman on March 01, 2005 07:21 pm -------------------- When theres no more room in hell, the dead will walk the earth...
 'They say people dont believe in heroes anymore... Well im going to give them back their hero." |
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| Elite viking |
Posted: March 01, 2005 09:07 pm
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
I know the nuclear explosion would have killed anything in the room, but Nikku had begged on his knees to make him come out of there alive. That was when the charge was thrown, and it was kinda hard to let Nikku or anyone else get out of there alive.
Also, the air would have burnt up, causing Nikku to choke if he survived the blast  I kinda compensated for that by wounding the two of them MASSIVELY. They are walking bodies, ready to drop anytime. Thanks for the lecture about radioactivity, Darkness, you're probly just angry because you died  hehe.I didn't say the radioactive fallout didn't happen, in fact everyone has gotten their lifetime shortened by 50 years. They will get deadly cancer within a month, and then perish. |
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| Nikku |
Posted: March 01, 2005 10:37 pm
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 Mr. Coke Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 3114 Joined: December 12, 2004 |
No dude No Dude No! Dont make it nuclear, I mean FFS they wouldnt have a nuke generator probualy jsut a gas one
-------------------- Only when you gick, will you truly fish...
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| Elite viking |
Posted: March 02, 2005 02:29 pm
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
It's already said it was a nuclear generator, I'm sorry but you have inhaled over 250 rem, enough to kill 3 people. You're strong, but not that strong. I'm sorry.
(Perhaps the Matrix' a little messed up? So that nuclear fallout isn't existing at all, or that it just speeds up the evolution of genes? I'll probly do the last one, radioactivity enhances evolution. Anyone in contact to radioactivity is enhanced ) |
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| Elite viking |
Posted: March 02, 2005 03:01 pm
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Veteran Lord Carnage Group: Old BB:S Betatesters Posts: 2471 Joined: December 16, 2004 |
Small update, I have a tight scedule today.
It took half an hour, but finally they were both patched up and in clothes. They had given each other a needle with morphine for the pain to give up, washed their skin with anti-septic and applied some jelly from a tube. Then they had used three rolls of bandage to cover up their open wounds before applying to the burnt skin as well, and then started to put on the security uniforms. The suits consisted of trousers in harder-than-regular fabric to block away the most simple of damage, sweaters in the same style, regular socks and lastly a light Kevlar suit over the chest. It could deflect light arms and knives, not much to cover against zombies, but it was better than nothing. When they had their clothes on, they filled their backpack with supplies. They had taken a satchel each, containing bandage, morphine and anti-septic as medicals, a kilo of canned food, some bottles of water and a rope. They knew they couldnt carry much more, so they chose light arms only. Hunter found a Raging Bull, and filled one of his pockets with rounds taped together in clusters of five. He took a Beretta 92fs too, with two additional mags. Nikku chose two Socoms, exactly like the ones he had. He took two clips for each pistol. When he stuck the HALO in an arm strap, he saw something in a corner, stacked up behind a broken vending machine. He walked over to it, and picked up one of the Smg looking weapon. It was a Tec-9 illegal, modified Automatic Pistol. So There are more shady business here as well Nikku grinned. He picked up two, found the 50-round magazines and fitted on a silencer and a laser pointer. They were ready to move out. At first, their speed was a slow pace, but gradually, as their bodies got used to it, they were walking in a regular walk. They supported themselves against each other, afraid of falling. Behind them all was silent, their footsteps the only sound in the whole compound. The clanking from Nikkus new welding boots blended with the soft bumping from Hunters regular. Clang bump Clang bump Clang... They were slowly approaching the outdoors. One time, Nikku thought he heard something, and whirled around with the Tec-9s pointing at empty air. Not a single soul was left here except for them. They were alone. Or so they thought This post has been edited by Elite viking on August 08, 2005 06:44 pm |
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