me agrees. Dont make me transform self into 90 foot tall kill robot.

Transforming into things is sort of stupid too

The rock zombie missed Grey Snake and The.Raver, two of the five in the now steadily diminishing group, by centimeters as it charged towards them.

Grey threw himself backwards in a backflip just as the slow motion kicked in. He aimed at the creatures head with his Smg, and pulled back the trigger. The bullet trails, streaks in the air instantly disappearing, went straight to its head.

Raver wasnt close to getting the agility Grey showed, he simply did a roll while whipping out his Socom.

It stopped a meter from the edge, turned around, and ran at them one more time. Now they were both ready for him, and shot it repeatedly between the eyes. Dave, the wounded security guard with a gunshot wound, had taken out his Beretta92fs. Just as he pulled the trigger ZombieSlaya had slapped in another clip, and swiftly pulled the lever. The gliding sound of a round getting chambered, stopping with a cling as the Full Metal Jacketed bullet hit the top of the barrel was unheard amongst the gunfire. His first gunshot was fatal.

Dave could hardly move, and was standing in the path of the undead overlord. His eyes widened up as he saw the stomping feet coming closer and closer, shaking the ground. Desperately he tried to drag himself away when one sound burned into his mind for the last seconds of his life:
Swoth.
The bullet hit just where it should, in the forehead. It sent a long curl of smoke from vaporized stone, hitting Dave in his eyes. It was worse than the gunshot. His eyes got pierced by thousands of small stone shards, instantly blinding him.

He slumped over, trying to drag himself away at the same time as he clawed his eyes. As he did so, the stone Hulk caught up with him. A small flick of intelligence lit up in its eyes as it saw the helpless creature lying under him. It smirked, and slowly lifted its foot.

Daves piercing scream, as one ton of rock crunched his stomach and forced his internal organs up his throat, was the worst sound any of them had heard. After the innards, dark blood mixed with stomach acid was spewed out of Daves mouth, darkening the ground.

WE DONT HAVE A FUCKING CHANCE -GET INTO THE CAR! Grey screamed while emptying his Beretta into the back of the creature.

The others slung themselves into the car, ZombieSlaya already revving up the engine. Raver took place behind the missile launcher, and prepared to open fire at once Grey had pulled back.

Be careful with the TOW, it fires damn big missiles! Slaya said, fearing the man might blow the car up.

Bam BamBam Klik. As the hammer hit an empty shell, Grey ran over to the jeep and quickly got into the back seat, skidding on the bloodstained floor.

Hit it!

The tires dug up gravel, spraying the zombie. It stood up and quit eating Daves lungs, and threw itself at the car. It rammed the car with its shoulder, hitting the missile launcher and breaking Ravers hand. The.Raver didnt scream, instead he bit his tongue until it was bleeding all over, as the bones in his hand were broken at multiple spots, totaling over fifty different fractures.

His now useless hand became limp as Raver couldnt control it anymore. The hand lost the grip on the controls, hitting a button as it fell downwards.
Whirring was heard inside the barrel of the TOW.

Oh no.

ZombieSlaya braced himself.

This post has been edited by Elite viking on August 08, 2005 06:18 pm

Pretty cool, more me atlast

Wow, cool as usual. I'm in a fucking predicament here (in life life.)

wait so is Slaya in the car?

yeah im in the car

I want to hide in the back seat!

This post has been edited by Gneralas on March 14, 2005 01:29 am

*Sexy female voice speaks up has Elite Viking logs on*
Hello Elite Viking! current story writing is up 100%!
Would you like to continue story? Y/N?
*Elite hits Yes.*
-ERROR-
Cl_FLUSH ENTITY PACKET NOT FOUND!
PLAYER ONEOFTHELOST NOT FOUND!
*Elite thinks: "I just DLed like fourteen pages ago!" *
DL these items? Y/N?
Y

-Loading.
Sprites/OneoftheLost
Textures/OneoftheLost
WAV./OneoftheLost/Were all gonna die!
WAV./OneoftheLost/oh god...THEYRE EVERYWHERE!
WAV./OneoftheLost/Please no more...just make it stop..
WAV./OneoftheLost/WAV. 1-23
Playermodels/OneoftheLost
Weapons/D.Eagle
-Loading
Server_maps:bb_Yet_Another_Story_With_Forum_Members!b1
DL complete! Would you like some coffee?
Y/N?
WARNING!

-Mr. Viking I am aware that you are unprotected from other forum members threatening your life.
*"Well no shit stupid computor." Elite steams*
-Download Defense protocols?
Y/N?
Y
40%
70%
80%
-Complete.
-Activating.
*G.O.D.s Voice* (Giant Osmosis Defense)
-YOU NIKKU! YOU HAVE DISOBEYED THE 1st commandment!
*Gobbles Nikku*
LET THIS BE AN EXAMPLE TO ALL YOU PUNY FORUM GOERS! THIS STORY CAN CONTINUE JSUT FINE WITHOUT YOU! AND IM HUNGRY SO VERY HUNGRY!
*Evil grin*
*Elite logs off*
Have a nice day Mr. Viking!
-Black.

ok OneOfTheLost, seriously dude, stfu, he has a life beyond a computer and the internet i bet, hust let him post when he feels like it damnit, anyways....

great story man! keep up the good work when you have the time to *glares at all the mindless forum zombies with a USAS-12 full auto 12 guage*

Lmao, wtf OneOfTheLost? I admit, that's pretty funny (especially the Comp asking if he wants coffee) but really. Most of us that aren't through with school (read: OLD) have things to do. Just let him get his story up when he can. A lot of people had to wait forever to get in, like Radman, and now I'm waiting just like you. In the mantime, I'm enjoying reding the stor. So...just wait. You'll come soon enough.

This post has been edited by Till Death Do us Part on March 14, 2005 02:02 pm

woa...didnt mean to be all offensive and shit. (and as for Nikku we friends we make jabs at eachother all the time! even in game once, although he didnt kno it was me) jeeese calm down. I have a life to, hence both my stories have shutdown, and this is the first time ive touched the computor in months....but hey whateva!
-Lata Zombiekillas!

Wow a nice long epic with forum members

/Me likes

ROFL that made me laugh so hard OneOfTheLost.
I am so sorry I forgot you and all, I'll make it good I promise! Btw thanks for the protective system

there's some advice I always follow when it has something to do wid most stuff that's important (coursework, etc) n that is: "Take ur time." stuff tends to b better when its not rushed
teh story is 1337